Tuesday, January 12, 2016

Yet again!



"XXXX revealed she celebrated finishing writing the XXXX series by making a permanent mark on her hotel room in a Twitter post marking the ninth anniversary of the poignant day on Monday."

OK. Bad writing is spreading ...

This is from The Guardian

"And data in Newham suggests this isn’t a simple case of social cleansing."

"data" is plural, like "media"!

So easy to fix this


"XXX reveals she has been burgled twice in message of support to fellow writer and break-in victim YYY"

Just start with "In message" and it all makes sense.